It is silent
No ripples embrace me
Let me not think about you
my dreams are dozing at your eyelids
right there
My ears are dumb as they couldn't listen to you
Still I can feel the echoes of that song of solitude
The lake is still
as if it is frozen
I can see the face you used to take in your hands
I can see the eyes that dreamt of your dreams
This is the face you loved once
Yes this is the face you loved once".
Thus she stayed there
And fell in love with herself
I do not know
if she turned to a flower later on
Who cares!!!
ഓരൊ കവിതയിലും ഒരു ജീനിയസിന്റെ കരവിരുതു! ഒരു പ്രണയിനിയുടെ ആത്മാവു,ഹൃദയനൈർമല്യത്തിന്റെ വിശുദ്ധത,പ്രതിഭയുടെ കയ്യൊപ്പു.. നന്നായിരിക്കുന്നു. എല്ലാ കവിതകളുടേയും ഒരു അവലോകനമാണെന്നു കൂട്ടിക്കോ... ഭാവുകങ്ങൾ1 കുഞ്ഞുബി
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Ur poems r mesmerising chechi, to say d least. keep up d good wrk:)
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